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12/30/2021 c3 avalavaa
Hi, I really like with the story even I'm not finished yet. But I can feel that you have great writing skill. anyway I want to give you an offer, but may I know your mailing acc? I will be glad that we can talk it at mail. Thanks and happy new year
4/5/2021 c22 18Sir Scott
Pretty nice chapter and congratulations on finishing this story. So many stories on this site go unfinished.
~Sir Scott
3/21/2021 c21 Sir Scott
That's pretty good. I think they call the stuff in italics stream of consciousness. If I remember my studies right.
~Sir Scott
3/1/2021 c20 Sir Scott
That's pretty clever plot twist. I look forward to seeing how she defeats the dark one.
~Sir Scott
2/13/2021 c19 Sir Scott
Maybe, a little confused, but things were starting to make sense in the end.
~Sir Scott
1/16/2021 c18 Sir Scott
It was a surprise. Pretty chapter. Now, let's see if Ella can defeat Luna.
~Sir Scott
12/30/2020 c17 Sir Scott
It was a pretty awesome chapter. It looks like Ella is getting used to her powers.
~Sir Scott
12/30/2020 c16 Sir Scott
I'm going with Seth, but Luna is a dark name in a way.
~Sir Scott
12/22/2020 c15 Sir Scott
It was good to have fresh material to read. I haven't work it out who the dark one is, but I have a few ideas.
~Sir Scott
10/27/2020 c13 19Renulen
Great chapter here.
10/26/2020 c13 18Sir Scott
Probably not, but Cody isn't at 100% trust level either.
~Sir Scott
10/16/2020 c12 Sir Scott
Thanks for the update. I sort of see Scarlett with black hair and red clothing.
~Sir Scott
10/16/2020 c12 19Renulen
The name "Forbidden Forest" really is a misleading name.

Great seeing an update.
9/28/2020 c11 18Sir Scott
He got be suspicious, but I think he's telling the truth, sort of.
~Sir Scott
9/26/2020 c11 19Renulen
A nice addition that brings in another character, nice.
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