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9/13 c1 17cud-b-better
Well it seems like a action story with super powers and monsters to kill, nothing wrong with that. I enjoyed the action scene, very well written and good choreography. It seems that one of the brothers is the melee type whilst the other being a spell caster. I was a little confused though as you mentioned that most people had been born with special powers yet the crowd of people just seemed to be gawking whilst the girl was being attacked and left it to the brothers. I could be missing something though. Just one minor error that I noticed:

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