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10/11/2020 c1 Guest
Ooo very nice. It's nice to see you post something. It seems like its been so long, but maybe I didn't see them.

Thank you for sharing this!
10/10/2020 c1 Guest
This continues to be as raw, emotional and impacting as most of your pieces have been throughout the years. To me this talks of the passing of time in a bitter, passionate and emotionally violent erotic tone. The nakedness here, to my interpretation references not just the physical, but the inner self laid bare, for whomever the male protagonist may be, if but they were truly willing to see. The resentment and anger, indicative of a loneliness in the female as the years have passed and nobody has yet been able to really fill the emptiness hidden from all, but herself and those intuitive enough to recognise it. This is just my take on it of course. This is an excellent piece, your gift is impressive, intact and inspiring. Your ability to convey such a multi layered, story this way is to be commended. I look forward to seeing more from you soon. Keep Writing, Fabian Cortez
10/9/2020 c1 Guest
A vidid delineation of ageing while holding onto the same role offered to socialisation. In the self disparagement runs pride in the desperation and abasement pride and a rigidity, one feels the angst.

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