for The Wonderful Universe Of God: Pilgrimage12/27/2021 c1 avalavaa
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9/21/2021 c1 
25hazelnutbrew
This was an interesting story. I like stories with religious themes in them, even though I’m not particularly that spiritual or religious myself because I find them fascinating and they make a lot of potential for supernatural events and miracles and stuff like demons in them as well. But anyway, the merits of this story stands on its concept, because I like the idea of the main character in the prologue (I’m guessing it’s Didymus or something like that) that is planning on going on a pilgrimage throughout the world or something like that to get closer with the beloved God of the World. It seems like Didymus has suffered a lot of hardship in his life, after losing his beloved family, though the priest in question has given him some comforting words to reflect on. I especially like the prayer and mantras that are given to the God of the world, because that is an interesting perspective and reflection about how humanity came to be in cosmology or theology or whatnot. I liked the part where the devoted ask about why they have flaws while the creator himself is perfect, and the Creator responds back that he made them have flaws so that they can become stronger and overcome their flaws. I think that’s an important distinction to make because flaws are what make us human and being perfectly human is part of the experience that we can all relate to. It’s true that even though we may have flaws as human beings, we do become stronger and better people when we try to master ourselves and overcome the personality quirks and weaknesses that we have. It makes our skills and whatnot more hard-earned and meaningful because we worked for them, and we can ultimately feel satisfaction and fulfillment for having overcome our weaknesses to make them into our strengths. Very good, I like this, and I rather enjoyed this story and the concept itself has intrigued me. I hope to be reading more of this, and you have a lot of interesting stories, it seems, some of which seem to long-runners as well. Good luck on your writing journey, and may you be blessed by the good vibes!
25hazelnutbrewThis was an interesting story. I like stories with religious themes in them, even though I’m not particularly that spiritual or religious myself because I find them fascinating and they make a lot of potential for supernatural events and miracles and stuff like demons in them as well. But anyway, the merits of this story stands on its concept, because I like the idea of the main character in the prologue (I’m guessing it’s Didymus or something like that) that is planning on going on a pilgrimage throughout the world or something like that to get closer with the beloved God of the World. It seems like Didymus has suffered a lot of hardship in his life, after losing his beloved family, though the priest in question has given him some comforting words to reflect on. I especially like the prayer and mantras that are given to the God of the world, because that is an interesting perspective and reflection about how humanity came to be in cosmology or theology or whatnot. I liked the part where the devoted ask about why they have flaws while the creator himself is perfect, and the Creator responds back that he made them have flaws so that they can become stronger and overcome their flaws. I think that’s an important distinction to make because flaws are what make us human and being perfectly human is part of the experience that we can all relate to. It’s true that even though we may have flaws as human beings, we do become stronger and better people when we try to master ourselves and overcome the personality quirks and weaknesses that we have. It makes our skills and whatnot more hard-earned and meaningful because we worked for them, and we can ultimately feel satisfaction and fulfillment for having overcome our weaknesses to make them into our strengths. Very good, I like this, and I rather enjoyed this story and the concept itself has intrigued me. I hope to be reading more of this, and you have a lot of interesting stories, it seems, some of which seem to long-runners as well. Good luck on your writing journey, and may you be blessed by the good vibes!
5/9/2021 c8 6Darth Zannacross
Well...we indeed have a strange duo to deal with today. Still...demons trying to reform are always a good thing for the goods guys, we need more Hellboy's and Spawn's to fight the good fight lol.
Guess we will see if he can be much help with these cultists soon enough.
6Darth ZannacrossWell...we indeed have a strange duo to deal with today. Still...demons trying to reform are always a good thing for the goods guys, we need more Hellboy's and Spawn's to fight the good fight lol.
Guess we will see if he can be much help with these cultists soon enough.
5/7/2021 c7 Darth Zannacross
Two cities fused together eh? That seems like it must be awkward with stuff like the wiring and pluming and what not lol.
Well, not the worst reception...guess we will see if the quiet streets are because of hostiles or just trying to avoid covid lol.
Two cities fused together eh? That seems like it must be awkward with stuff like the wiring and pluming and what not lol.
Well, not the worst reception...guess we will see if the quiet streets are because of hostiles or just trying to avoid covid lol.
5/6/2021 c6 Darth Zannacross
Well...even if these Worshipers are not demons they sure are demonic enough to act like they belong in hell alright. Not sure what was up with that font change at the end...lets hope her being a woman won't be to much of a problem for the group.
Well...even if these Worshipers are not demons they sure are demonic enough to act like they belong in hell alright. Not sure what was up with that font change at the end...lets hope her being a woman won't be to much of a problem for the group.
2/28/2021 c5 Darth Zannacross
We got some vile problems roaming around today, though its mostly seeking then fighting, we will see if the Saint Knights can do there job soon enough.
We got some vile problems roaming around today, though its mostly seeking then fighting, we will see if the Saint Knights can do there job soon enough.
2/27/2021 c4 Darth Zannacross
Welp as crashed ships go it could be worst...at least a army of zombies are not storming out. Still...we will see if the new allies will be a boon or a hindrance soon enough.
Welp as crashed ships go it could be worst...at least a army of zombies are not storming out. Still...we will see if the new allies will be a boon or a hindrance soon enough.
2/26/2021 c3 Darth Zannacross
Alright back to this pilgrimage, were we see just what is seen as Unique in these parts.
These Saint Knights do seem dandy, we will see just what they can do for real soon enough I guess.
Alright back to this pilgrimage, were we see just what is seen as Unique in these parts.
These Saint Knights do seem dandy, we will see just what they can do for real soon enough I guess.
12/31/2020 c2 Darth Zannacross
We learn about the Lord of Chaos today, sounds a tad chaotic of a fellow, though in theory he's still sealed, Saruon was still sealed and caused a lot of problems so, who knows...still...desserts merging with continents, this world's seen a lot of trauma, and since Paul and co are so good at slaying monsters its clear they had time to get good at this. Still, we will see what sprouts from this beginning.
We learn about the Lord of Chaos today, sounds a tad chaotic of a fellow, though in theory he's still sealed, Saruon was still sealed and caused a lot of problems so, who knows...still...desserts merging with continents, this world's seen a lot of trauma, and since Paul and co are so good at slaying monsters its clear they had time to get good at this. Still, we will see what sprouts from this beginning.
12/30/2020 c1 Darth Zannacross
Paul eh? Between that and religious fervor, we will see how much this has in common with the infamous Dune serious lol.
Paul eh? Between that and religious fervor, we will see how much this has in common with the infamous Dune serious lol.