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4/27/2021 c1 5MA Frio
I like how you play with a type of horror that’s almost supernatural but doesn’t cross that line. It’s creepy and the homeless guy almost feels like a paranormal presence but it stops before going into that territory. I liked the story in general; good, clean writing with just a couple word choices that were a bit off (I curse all the time but the words “tits” and “fucking” seem out of place with the rest of the text; they just don’t seem to match the style of the rest of the narration, making the first person narrator a bit OOC, imo.) Wish it were longer with more moments of suspense, but it was still a pretty decent quick read.

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