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1/23/2021 c1 9Mislav
Very fun to read. Psychotic cyborgs in a Borneo jungle; that's a sight. I like the idea of the dart revolver that uses a laser rangefinder to modulate the velocity of each micro-dart via magnetic launcher. I especially liked the opening line: "Doctor Jake Murphy was not born in the Bornean jungles, but he did not intend to die there." And this one: "He was gone when the Metalhead's blade arrived where he'd been." I also liked how Murphy noted that he planned on transitioning into a cyborg body one day; but not today. I was almost worried for him at the end. I'm glad he made it. Keep it up. I always like reading your stories.

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