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9/18 c1 8Mislav
This was a great piece of flash/postcard fiction. You said a lot in a little over 200 words. Great job getting into the mind of a contact killer heading to avenge her friend. This line was especially cool: "Old habits were hard to kill and Samantha was a trained killer after all." The last line was badass: "She kept her head down, stepped off, then disappeared into the crowd, a skill that she had mastered after years of use, and one she thought she never would have to use again until today." I wouldn't mind reading a longer version or a sequel to this, but this works really well too. Keep up the great work. I always like reading your stories.

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