10/16/2022 c1 14Mislav
Very powerful and beautiful haiku. It conveys so much and provoles so much imagery in just three lyrics. I liked the adjectives you used: "vicious" for beauty, "glacial" for fortitude and "ardent" for resolve. Even the summary was chilling yet beautiful: "To the girls whose blood runs red with the memories of war." Keep up the great work. I always like reading your works.
Very powerful and beautiful haiku. It conveys so much and provoles so much imagery in just three lyrics. I liked the adjectives you used: "vicious" for beauty, "glacial" for fortitude and "ardent" for resolve. Even the summary was chilling yet beautiful: "To the girls whose blood runs red with the memories of war." Keep up the great work. I always like reading your works.