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9/28/2021 c1 5TamariMizu
Hi there!

Very sad story, but life can be funny like that.

I liked the whole 'creepy little town' vibe that would be at home in a Stephen King short story or a Twilight Zone episode. Did you ever read King's short story 'The end of the Whole Mess'? It features a town with a similar weird secret.

My only suggestion would be to show the Golden Rule 'occurring' to one of the protagonists.

Keep writing!

TM
6/17/2021 c1 2MV Kramer
Excellent story. Have you thought about submitting it for publishing?

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