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9/14/2021 c1 Dillon Conner
Your title should read "A Broken Cyborg" not "A broken Cyborg", and there is a typo in your synopsis that is going to deter a lot of readers. It reads "stranvge" and should read "strange". There are several proofing issues in the teaser as well that need attention. Random words are capitalized and you're missing punctuation in several places. There are several run-on sentences that need cleaning up too.

Remember, our stories are only as interesting as they are consumable. It looks like you're thinking in the right direction. I can see the thought process, the action, and even some humor here, but the lack of proofreading is going to limit your story's reach. Keep it up!

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