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Wow! That was very intriguing! In this little snippet, you managed to establish a very interesting world and very interesting characters. Emilia seems like she would be an amazing character to follow for a whole novel or maybe even more than that. I also loved how you incorporated some Italian into this. Even though it says in the description that this is only a snippet, I would love to see more.

Good job!

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