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8/6 c1 7Mislav
This was a pretty interesting and creepy story. It kept me guessing until the end. The dream/nightmare was trippy and had some pretty disturbing visuals, such as those yellow stick figures at the table and black stick figures that attacked Ben. The ending left me wondering: did Ben really die at the end, was it just a nightmare, some kind of supernatural occurrence...? Ben was a pretty likeable character; I liked his interaction with his sister at the beginning. It is a pretty terrifying idea, for somebody to die in their sleep but still be aware and plagued by nightmares in their final moments. Keep up the great work. I will definitely read your other stories.

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