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9/1/2021 c1 9Mislav
Very fun and intense short story. You said a lot in less than 200 words. I liked the detail where she smelled the perspiration of her breath in the fetid space suit. I winced when she tasted "coppery blood" after biting into her tongue with gritted teeth. So glad that she managed to pull her friend in at the last moment. I agree with the other reviewer, that the story almost read like a poem. I wonder if this is a sequel to "Arachne". Keep up the great work. I always like reading your stories.
8/9/2021 c1 2MV Kramer
Great imagery. It almost seems like a poem, the way you structured it.

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