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8/20/2021 c1 9taerkitty
"Sandra saw all possible futures," felt incomplete to me. The opening stated she never saw it coming, so _how_ did Lara do that? Or, another angle might be to show what she _did_ see, and perhaps what she thought as "she felt the fist make contact."

I learned that the opening to a story contains some hook, usually a question to entice the reader. In this case, how does someone land a punch on a precognitive boxer? Or, what happens when a precognitive boxer is unexpectedly punched?

Cool concept. You don't need to be a precog to know how the next fight will end.

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