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10/15/2021 c1 5TamariMizu
Hi D.B. Robb,

This really feels like the first chapter of an intriguing start to a great longer tale.

The creator reminded me of 'father' from Fallout 4 creating synthetic life as if they were toys.

A fascinating blending of the Garden of Eden, John Carter, and Martian Chronicles. :)

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10/12/2021 c1 2MV Kramer
What a beautiful, sad story. I liked the Biblical parallels, as well as how a human from Earth was the creator of these genetically-engineered people. It was interesting that there was a garden on Mars, though: was there a terraforming project going on?

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