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10/29/2021 c1 1Missy.S
I enjoyed the story and I like all the descriptions of colors. Although there are a few sentences here and there that need to be fixed. 'I get back down the road and continue down the road' sentences like these just need to be reworded. Even just adding periods to make the sentences shorter and more dramatic, to emphasis the struggle of riding the bike. This will help the desperation that they are feeling that way the ending comment will stand out even more, other than that this is a great draft.

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