for The Light of the World5/2 c1 
3EpicRomanceLover28
I've just started to read this & i'm already hooked. It's good to find a well written world war 2 story on here.
3EpicRomanceLover28I've just started to read this & i'm already hooked. It's good to find a well written world war 2 story on here.
4/17 c69 Lexi Frank
Your story is truly captivating! The way you bring the characters and world to life is nothing short of brilliant. I was completely immersed in every moment, feeling every emotion and I absolutely loved every bit of it.,
Your story is truly captivating! The way you bring the characters and world to life is nothing short of brilliant. I was completely immersed in every moment, feeling every emotion and I absolutely loved every bit of it.,
1/8 c1 Lisa-Katagiri
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "The Light of the World" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "The Light of the World" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
5/19/2024 c30 5glide10001
This chapter gave a lighter side of Harold. He's had some pretty rough going to date. A lot of how I see him is going to depend on whether he keeps his promise and cleans up the porridge pot.
5glide10001This chapter gave a lighter side of Harold. He's had some pretty rough going to date. A lot of how I see him is going to depend on whether he keeps his promise and cleans up the porridge pot.
5/18/2024 c29 glide10001
I don't mean to beat a dead horse, but this would work really well in first person rather than third. I'm reading it as if it was Cathy's journal even in third person.
I don't mean to beat a dead horse, but this would work really well in first person rather than third. I'm reading it as if it was Cathy's journal even in third person.
5/16/2024 c28 glide10001
I enjoyed finding out some about Walter and Marie's history.
Question: Why did you write this in third person rather than first person from Marie's perspective?
I enjoyed finding out some about Walter and Marie's history.
Question: Why did you write this in third person rather than first person from Marie's perspective?
5/13/2024 c27 glide10001
1. Not Marie's finest hour. I had to double check that she wasn't one of the children when she was complaining so much about handling baggage on the train.
2. Walter came back well from threatening to fight his son. I really liked his admitting to the kids that it was hard for him to trust even God with his family.
I enjoy that your characters have both strengths and weaknesses.
1. Not Marie's finest hour. I had to double check that she wasn't one of the children when she was complaining so much about handling baggage on the train.
2. Walter came back well from threatening to fight his son. I really liked his admitting to the kids that it was hard for him to trust even God with his family.
I enjoy that your characters have both strengths and weaknesses.
5/11/2024 c26 glide10001
Interesting to find out that Cathy has not yet accepted Christ into her heart. That gives me something to look forward to.
Interesting to find out that Cathy has not yet accepted Christ into her heart. That gives me something to look forward to.
5/9/2024 c25 glide10001
I'm glad they got through without Harold shooting a hole in the aside of the boat.
I'm glad they got through without Harold shooting a hole in the aside of the boat.
5/5/2024 c24 glide10001
This was a great "for lack of a nail... a battle was lost" chapter. Also, it ending with Cathy and Stevie asleep on a park bench is a cliffhanger which you haven't done before. Probably your best overall chapter yet.
This was a great "for lack of a nail... a battle was lost" chapter. Also, it ending with Cathy and Stevie asleep on a park bench is a cliffhanger which you haven't done before. Probably your best overall chapter yet.
5/3/2024 c23 glide10001
I enjoyed Cathy's reaction to the other girl's fine clothes and shoes. It added a sense of normalcy to her.
I enjoyed Cathy's reaction to the other girl's fine clothes and shoes. It added a sense of normalcy to her.
4/30/2024 c21 glide10001
I liked how the kids from a small island wanted to experience the train. It represented one of the many things in their near future that they have heard of but never experienced.
I liked how the kids from a small island wanted to experience the train. It represented one of the many things in their near future that they have heard of but never experienced.
4/27/2024 c19 glide10001
Stevie is an annoying child. But I tend to find kids that age annoying. It's not their fault and you have written him realistically.
Stevie is an annoying child. But I tend to find kids that age annoying. It's not their fault and you have written him realistically.
4/22/2024 c18 glide10001
The close passage with the Europa added excitement. The fact that it was a German ship gave it a little extra oomph.
The close passage with the Europa added excitement. The fact that it was a German ship gave it a little extra oomph.