for Yellow Sun Academy2/19 c1 itxgametech
I wanted to take a moment to share my thoughts on your story, I loved it! The way it has been written so creatively makes it truly enjoyable and engaging. I feel that this story has great potential to be converted into a comic. I believe audiences would absolutely love it if it were adapted into that format!
Contact info:
Discord: itsgametech
Email: itxgametech at gmail for com
Best regards,
Sunny
I wanted to take a moment to share my thoughts on your story, I loved it! The way it has been written so creatively makes it truly enjoyable and engaging. I feel that this story has great potential to be converted into a comic. I believe audiences would absolutely love it if it were adapted into that format!
Contact info:
Discord: itsgametech
Email: itxgametech at gmail for com
Best regards,
Sunny
1/9 c1 Crimson Horizon
Hello,
I hope you're doing great! I recently came across your story "Yellow Sun Academy" and was genuinely impressed by how compelling and creative it is. It immediately inspired me to imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or manga.
As a commission artist, I specialize in translating stories into dynamic visuals, and I believe your work has incredible potential to shine in this format. Just to be clear, I work exclusively on a commission basis and wanted to make that clear from the start.
If this aligns with your vision, feel free to reach out to me through these platforms:
Discord: sabon1_
Twitter: Feeliphee_
DeviantArt: ZamainLov
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Hello,
I hope you're doing great! I recently came across your story "Yellow Sun Academy" and was genuinely impressed by how compelling and creative it is. It immediately inspired me to imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or manga.
As a commission artist, I specialize in translating stories into dynamic visuals, and I believe your work has incredible potential to shine in this format. Just to be clear, I work exclusively on a commission basis and wanted to make that clear from the start.
If this aligns with your vision, feel free to reach out to me through these platforms:
Discord: sabon1_
Twitter: Feeliphee_
DeviantArt: ZamainLov
Looking forward to hearing from you!
11/24/2024 c1 LunaNoir
This story is an imaginative and thrilling post-apocalyptic narrative that blends science fiction with survival drama. The concept of a red sun altering life on Earth, from plants to animals, and even humans, is incredibly compelling. The detailed progression of events from the mutations to Monty's discovery of his gifts keeps the reader engaged and invested in humanity’s fight for survival. Monty’s journey from a lone survivor to a leader of gifted individuals is inspiring and makes for a fantastic hero’s arc.
This story has immense potential for visual mediums. It would translate beautifully into a comic or webtoon, where the vivid imagery of mutated flora, fauna, and humanity’s resilience could be visually stunning. A motion comic adaptation could further enhance the storytelling with dynamic visuals, sound effects, and music, bringing this gripping world to life. If you'd be open to discussing turning this story into another medium, I’d love to collaborate! Feel free to reach out via my Discord handle, noir_love, or email. As a commission artist specializing in adapting stories into visuals, I’d be thrilled to help bring your vision to reality.
This story is an imaginative and thrilling post-apocalyptic narrative that blends science fiction with survival drama. The concept of a red sun altering life on Earth, from plants to animals, and even humans, is incredibly compelling. The detailed progression of events from the mutations to Monty's discovery of his gifts keeps the reader engaged and invested in humanity’s fight for survival. Monty’s journey from a lone survivor to a leader of gifted individuals is inspiring and makes for a fantastic hero’s arc.
This story has immense potential for visual mediums. It would translate beautifully into a comic or webtoon, where the vivid imagery of mutated flora, fauna, and humanity’s resilience could be visually stunning. A motion comic adaptation could further enhance the storytelling with dynamic visuals, sound effects, and music, bringing this gripping world to life. If you'd be open to discussing turning this story into another medium, I’d love to collaborate! Feel free to reach out via my Discord handle, noir_love, or email. As a commission artist specializing in adapting stories into visuals, I’d be thrilled to help bring your vision to reality.
8/3/2024 c7 
14LittleAlchemist
This was well-written and creative with the action. Seems like everyone's getting themselves into quite a bit of trouble.
14LittleAlchemistThis was well-written and creative with the action. Seems like everyone's getting themselves into quite a bit of trouble.
8/3/2024 c6 LittleAlchemist
I can definitely see the RWBY similarities with the ejecting, landing strategies and chess pieces for four-man groups. We even got a Juan there complaining about falling xD I'm eager to see the next fight!
I can definitely see the RWBY similarities with the ejecting, landing strategies and chess pieces for four-man groups. We even got a Juan there complaining about falling xD I'm eager to see the next fight!
8/3/2024 c5 LittleAlchemist
A first exam already and desert survival. I smell another fight scene incoming! For a second there, when those pillars shot up, I wondered if this was gonna get dark and they'd all have to fight each other for a place in the school
A first exam already and desert survival. I smell another fight scene incoming! For a second there, when those pillars shot up, I wondered if this was gonna get dark and they'd all have to fight each other for a place in the school
8/3/2024 c4 LittleAlchemist
Lol Alodia sounds like a handful. The fact that they've been split up is a little suspicious. Maybe this is an individual test for each of them. It's the greatest fighter academy in the world after all.
Lol Alodia sounds like a handful. The fact that they've been split up is a little suspicious. Maybe this is an individual test for each of them. It's the greatest fighter academy in the world after all.
8/3/2024 c3 LittleAlchemist
This is an interesting start to the story! I'm gradually getting more and more into it. Fights with superpowers are awesome!
This is an interesting start to the story! I'm gradually getting more and more into it. Fights with superpowers are awesome!
5/21/2024 c1 X from Aumsville
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5/21/2024 c3 Kyle
I wonder why my review didn't go thru.
I wonder why my review didn't go thru.
5/21/2024 c4 Kyle
Considering this is going into foreign territory I'd bring along a cheap battery portable CO (Carbon Monixide) detector for my new dorm as a lot of 3rd world areas lack them and even in first world areas older buildings are often grandfathered in from having it. (Grandfather clause) unless serious remodeling happens that exposes the guts of the building/academy then they HAVE to be brought up to modern code of the time of new construction.
Rick Steves forums has several mentions of bringing a CO alarm thru airport security and I think if you show them it's a battery device they won't freak out by putting the battery in briefly then taking it out though I don't think the 3 students are going thru an airport so I doubt this is an issue.
Here's a newer 2021 thread a lot of them are from 2015ish.
travel-forum/packing/carbon-monoxide-detector-for-travel
Considering this is going into foreign territory I'd bring along a cheap battery portable CO (Carbon Monixide) detector for my new dorm as a lot of 3rd world areas lack them and even in first world areas older buildings are often grandfathered in from having it. (Grandfather clause) unless serious remodeling happens that exposes the guts of the building/academy then they HAVE to be brought up to modern code of the time of new construction.
Rick Steves forums has several mentions of bringing a CO alarm thru airport security and I think if you show them it's a battery device they won't freak out by putting the battery in briefly then taking it out though I don't think the 3 students are going thru an airport so I doubt this is an issue.
Here's a newer 2021 thread a lot of them are from 2015ish.
travel-forum/packing/carbon-monoxide-detector-for-travel
5/21/2024 c3 Kyle
Sorry for ranting but A03 just makes me upset in so many ways as it DOES have the potential to be a good site due to the useful tools but often authors lash out and readers lash back and it just ends up being a pile of dogshit on both sides. You can't make suggestions or anything either unless you give blind praise which I cannot do it's not right and doesn't sit well.
Sorry for ranting but A03 just makes me upset in so many ways as it DOES have the potential to be a good site due to the useful tools but often authors lash out and readers lash back and it just ends up being a pile of dogshit on both sides. You can't make suggestions or anything either unless you give blind praise which I cannot do it's not right and doesn't sit well.
5/21/2024 c1 Kyle
Wouldn't sites like Space Weather be on top of reporting this kind of thing? :/
Wouldn't sites like Space Weather be on top of reporting this kind of thing? :/
5/21/2024 c2 Kyle
The guy from Sitejabber is actually right about oversensitive people on all sides. Only go there if you have a thick skin and don't have any sort of moral standards whatsoever. 1: This site and Fanfiction dot net despite both dying breeds are still leagues better to navigate despite lack of content control in certain situations as it encourages a reader/writer feedback where A03 is for passive or passive aggressive reading:
2; then those writing authors complain about this and that usually trivial things that most would shrug off on the Reddit Sub forcing readers to be backed into a corner unable to say what's really going on. You won't believe all the 'Whoa is me' threads by all these so called 'writers' that are usually solvable by the sites tools and usually non trivial to begin with. In the rare cases it is a big issue (DDOS) Bot spams again the site tools will quickly curtail that. YOU have control over your fanfic tools don't come crying to us.
The chained comments of modern fanfic sites tend to lead to echo chambers where if you break that you get flash mobbed so you can't even explain that to authors who want all readers be punished for the crime of a few.
The guy from Sitejabber is actually right about oversensitive people on all sides. Only go there if you have a thick skin and don't have any sort of moral standards whatsoever. 1: This site and Fanfiction dot net despite both dying breeds are still leagues better to navigate despite lack of content control in certain situations as it encourages a reader/writer feedback where A03 is for passive or passive aggressive reading:
2; then those writing authors complain about this and that usually trivial things that most would shrug off on the Reddit Sub forcing readers to be backed into a corner unable to say what's really going on. You won't believe all the 'Whoa is me' threads by all these so called 'writers' that are usually solvable by the sites tools and usually non trivial to begin with. In the rare cases it is a big issue (DDOS) Bot spams again the site tools will quickly curtail that. YOU have control over your fanfic tools don't come crying to us.
The chained comments of modern fanfic sites tend to lead to echo chambers where if you break that you get flash mobbed so you can't even explain that to authors who want all readers be punished for the crime of a few.