
11/4/2024 c1
169MallowsWins
Hello! It's been a while!
I really enjoy how much warmth there is in a poem called Ice, how that quiet intimacy contrasts with the chill of the morning.
I also love all the sensory details - the imagery of dawn and the aurora borealis, the smell of breakfast cooking, the feel of the chill in the air, and the thrum of the movement in the water. It all blends together perfectly.
Beautiful poem, as always.

Hello! It's been a while!
I really enjoy how much warmth there is in a poem called Ice, how that quiet intimacy contrasts with the chill of the morning.
I also love all the sensory details - the imagery of dawn and the aurora borealis, the smell of breakfast cooking, the feel of the chill in the air, and the thrum of the movement in the water. It all blends together perfectly.
Beautiful poem, as always.