for Stay, Please Stay8/6 c1 
44master's apprentice
I really liked this, you can feel the longing and desperation to remain together and the sense that the other person makes up so much of who the writer is. But you also do it in such a way that while there is a tinge of melancholy in some of the words it doesn't feel like a poem of someone crying out from a place of loss but a place of love. It makes me feel like wrapping myself up in someone else and just staying like that.
44master's apprenticeI really liked this, you can feel the longing and desperation to remain together and the sense that the other person makes up so much of who the writer is. But you also do it in such a way that while there is a tinge of melancholy in some of the words it doesn't feel like a poem of someone crying out from a place of loss but a place of love. It makes me feel like wrapping myself up in someone else and just staying like that.
7/31 c1 12Kurono Kuro
That was a good delivery! I really felt the longing here, and gripping desire to be with their beloved. To stay together until the very end, until the very last second, would be beautiful and heartbreaking-You managed to give that nuance. It is a really good poem!
12Kurono KuroThat was a good delivery! I really felt the longing here, and gripping desire to be with their beloved. To stay together until the very end, until the very last second, would be beautiful and heartbreaking-You managed to give that nuance. It is a really good poem!