
9/22/2024 c9
6zacharyruffing
fascinating and cool reveal. Also sort of saw the Rafiki angle but not quite and like how you've worked it. Not sure quite where this is going and what you are trying to say aabout myths or religious traditions, if anything, but eager to read forward whatever.

fascinating and cool reveal. Also sort of saw the Rafiki angle but not quite and like how you've worked it. Not sure quite where this is going and what you are trying to say aabout myths or religious traditions, if anything, but eager to read forward whatever.
9/22/2024 c8 zacharyruffing
didn't see the tigers coming. I thought that was just a throwaway joke earlier ithe story nice and good look at a lot of old myths. Again you are good at looking at stuff like oral traditions and such thoughout this story. i also love some of the references that humans do this or that but lions don't which shows a weird fourt-wall breaking that they know what said things are and have a good grasp of them even though they talk of their ignorance. It is nice and humorously ironic.
didn't see the tigers coming. I thought that was just a throwaway joke earlier ithe story nice and good look at a lot of old myths. Again you are good at looking at stuff like oral traditions and such thoughout this story. i also love some of the references that humans do this or that but lions don't which shows a weird fourt-wall breaking that they know what said things are and have a good grasp of them even though they talk of their ignorance. It is nice and humorously ironic.
9/22/2024 c7 zacharyruffing
very good and love where this is going. who would've thought a satanic reference in a Lion King parody would be a major plot point. I am Loving where this is going and how you continue to explore myths.
One question though. At one point a character says "I heard he died in a Flash Food." Did you mean "flood?"
very good and love where this is going. who would've thought a satanic reference in a Lion King parody would be a major plot point. I am Loving where this is going and how you continue to explore myths.
One question though. At one point a character says "I heard he died in a Flash Food." Did you mean "flood?"
9/21/2024 c6 zacharyruffing
love the mentions of real lion pride dynamics vs. the movie and gain how you mock how myths form it is pretty funny and I think this is the best story I've read by you. It continues to impress.
love the mentions of real lion pride dynamics vs. the movie and gain how you mock how myths form it is pretty funny and I think this is the best story I've read by you. It continues to impress.
9/21/2024 c5 zacharyruffing
This was again agreat chapter making fun of a lot of things but in particular the parts of the Lion King that are the weakest. and love the Hakuna Matata joke considering how much I hate that song. but a lot of making fun of stuff and again making fun of the maleability of myth too as well as the Disney movie. I want to see where else this goes.
This was again agreat chapter making fun of a lot of things but in particular the parts of the Lion King that are the weakest. and love the Hakuna Matata joke considering how much I hate that song. but a lot of making fun of stuff and again making fun of the maleability of myth too as well as the Disney movie. I want to see where else this goes.
9/21/2024 c4 zacharyruffing
good one here, love the reference and the mixed legends story of the creature described supposedly in revelations. Interesting bit about how myths are formed and adapt. Also, great gag with referencing the scene that broke our hearts when we were kids in a weird witness thing. Was pretty cool and want to see where things go.
good one here, love the reference and the mixed legends story of the creature described supposedly in revelations. Interesting bit about how myths are formed and adapt. Also, great gag with referencing the scene that broke our hearts when we were kids in a weird witness thing. Was pretty cool and want to see where things go.
9/19/2024 c3 zacharyruffing
liking this particularly the posturing around the river log crossing and not being willing to admit the danger of the crocodile in the water. Love how much of a blowhard the father is and it makes things particularly funny.
liking this particularly the posturing around the river log crossing and not being willing to admit the danger of the crocodile in the water. Love how much of a blowhard the father is and it makes things particularly funny.
9/18/2024 c2 zacharyruffing
love the way you reference th emovie both in narration and the characters. I know lots of people who'd love this. I certainly do. I particularly like the reference to "Can't wait to be King'" sequence and song from the movie which was a song I always hated.
I want to see the part that parodies scar and the hyenas.
love the way you reference th emovie both in narration and the characters. I know lots of people who'd love this. I certainly do. I particularly like the reference to "Can't wait to be King'" sequence and song from the movie which was a song I always hated.
I want to see the part that parodies scar and the hyenas.
9/18/2024 c1 zacharyruffing
This is Great! I love how you poke fun at some of the scenes from the classic movie of my generation and make them incredibly silly, which they were. Also, I think lions are sort of funny too, especially because a lot of the features the males have like their manes are actually not very practical or helpful to them and usually the male just lazes about all the time and doesn't do much other than fight. You definitely have me hooked for this one and it reminds me of the stories I read when I first met you.
Can't wait to see more. You have a great knack for humor and you should do more stuff like this.
This is Great! I love how you poke fun at some of the scenes from the classic movie of my generation and make them incredibly silly, which they were. Also, I think lions are sort of funny too, especially because a lot of the features the males have like their manes are actually not very practical or helpful to them and usually the male just lazes about all the time and doesn't do much other than fight. You definitely have me hooked for this one and it reminds me of the stories I read when I first met you.
Can't wait to see more. You have a great knack for humor and you should do more stuff like this.