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69atalantea
I need to google all the trees that you mention in your poems. Gemel earlier, Saguaro now. I like how you use these specific details.
I must say I like the first two lines best. I like the romance in the first line, and the subtle drama of the second.
Keep writing!

I need to google all the trees that you mention in your poems. Gemel earlier, Saguaro now. I like how you use these specific details.
I must say I like the first two lines best. I like the romance in the first line, and the subtle drama of the second.
Keep writing!
11/30/2024 c1
1mulberryjam
I really like the rhythm of your words... and I am a strong believer in using punctuation in verse, so yay! The picture you paint of the speaker is so vivid and I can almost see an actor performing this on stage. I love the change of direction from internal to an external heavenward cry.

I really like the rhythm of your words... and I am a strong believer in using punctuation in verse, so yay! The picture you paint of the speaker is so vivid and I can almost see an actor performing this on stage. I love the change of direction from internal to an external heavenward cry.
11/18/2024 c1 Susanaury
I absolutely love your writing! The characters you’ve created are amazing, and your storytelling is always captivating. If you have any book recommendations, I’d be thrilled to hear them. I’m really looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
As someone who loves exploring different genres, your writing has completely drawn me in.
I’m also an artist and would love the opportunity to bring your characters to life through my art. It would be an honor to include them in my portfolio. I offer affordable prices, high-quality work, and creative ideas to help bring your vision to life.
Feel free to reach out to me!
Discord: sunsanaury_54667
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I absolutely love your writing! The characters you’ve created are amazing, and your storytelling is always captivating. If you have any book recommendations, I’d be thrilled to hear them. I’m really looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
As someone who loves exploring different genres, your writing has completely drawn me in.
I’m also an artist and would love the opportunity to bring your characters to life through my art. It would be an honor to include them in my portfolio. I offer affordable prices, high-quality work, and creative ideas to help bring your vision to life.
Feel free to reach out to me!
Discord: sunsanaury_54667
Instagram:
Email: