for The Seven Principles of Kwanzaa12/26/2024 c1 
6zacharyruffing
I think this was a definite strong one from you. It has power, follows a definite rhythm, not only metrically but also in the pattern you use in terms of word choice and structure linguistically.
This particularly resonates with me. Not because I celebrate. I am super-white, but rather because I have read some prot-Rastafari stuff recently that helped get the movements rolling that led to the founding of the holiday.
Informative, good solid metre, and excellent word choice as well as good structure. You are hitting on ally cyllinders here.
6zacharyruffingI think this was a definite strong one from you. It has power, follows a definite rhythm, not only metrically but also in the pattern you use in terms of word choice and structure linguistically.
This particularly resonates with me. Not because I celebrate. I am super-white, but rather because I have read some prot-Rastafari stuff recently that helped get the movements rolling that led to the founding of the holiday.
Informative, good solid metre, and excellent word choice as well as good structure. You are hitting on ally cyllinders here.