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2/22/2006 c1 3Shadu
Huh...interesting. It moved a bit fast though, I think. It also jumped around a lot. Not that it was confusing, really, but frustrating. The individual parts after the lines could've used more detail. And the first part was kind of confusing. It leaves the reader wondering "What in the world does that matter?" Anyways, I think it's a good start though. The story has potential.

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2/24/2005 c1 Aimers
Very well written. Definately a favourite.
1/1/2002 c1 2Raven White
Very well written, as is the rest of your work. . . But then again I'm a bit biased when it comes to that ;) Keep up the good work.
7/24/2001 c1 ROBIN
WHY SO SHORT - ?
7/6/2001 c1 sara
um ok this isn't a total copy of the book. god it really sucks royally. it's plagerism.

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