11/7/2003 c1 17Lady Cantara
thankyou. this is the most beautiful thing I hae ever read. I literally made me cry. Thankyou for writing this. it is wonderful.

4/8/2002 c1 Eve D
Nice one, Lori. I love the rhymes and the calm-but-dark aura :)

7/8/2001 c1 digital rain
i absolutly love it.

7/8/2001 c1 emotionsickprincess
i liked that so much! i wsh i could wrte something like that!

please review some of my work if you get the chance.

emly.