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4/22/2003 c1 10Delilah
That was amazing! I've done the lucid dreaming thing before, by accident, but still it was a bit freaky. This messes with my mind, but that's good!
7/10/2001 c1 16PatrickTheWriter
Wow, this was amazing, it may violate almost every rule that I have been taught in couple fiction writing classes but wow. I love the use of a fictionalized essay, I really do. I do, however, have a couple of thoughts: show me more than tell me. This is something basic, of course, but I, over time, learned it works. This piece has a mountian of potential. I want to see these lucid dreams with her. I want to know what it was like, etc. I want to see her withdraw into her own dream-like madness. You have a lot here, and I look forward to reading it in the future. This story, as it is, is one hell of a testimony that is beautifully written.

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