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5/23/2005 c1 35The Fourth Fate
Creepy...I really like it! You're really good at personification! It's a creepy but strangely comforting story...
8/1/2003 c1 10Nyze Skairey Aptle
Hi'lo-

I love your grammar, such a touching story, could you please read some of my stuff, like my poems that start with "the life of a-"

-Byegood
7/15/2001 c1 23ForYouIBleed
There needs to be spaces between the period of one sentance and the first letter of the next. Start a new paragraph when a new person speaks. I couldn't even read the whole thing because the spelling errors gave me a headache.
7/14/2001 c1 27Camille
As uaual Tanya you have a great first chapter...and about me having a talent for poetry, you are sooooooooo very wrong! But anyways I'm waiting patiently for the second chapter? You are the greatest writer in our school?

Your Friend Camille
7/13/2001 c1 1Rusty Oatmeal
The spelling could have been better and there should have been more detail, but overall, it seems like a pretty good idea to branch out from.
7/10/2001 c1 Tanya
I think I did pretty good and I hope you do to.Thank you for reviewing my first chapter.Next one will be out soon...
7/9/2001 c1 5RainbowTerrorist
Multiple spelling errors make this far too annoying to read.

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