for A Swirl of Emotions7/11/2001 c1 
33Whispering Night
I like the way you set this up, with each stanza beginning with the same line.
33Whispering NightI like the way you set this up, with each stanza beginning with the same line.
7/9/2001 c1 69black fairy
I know how you feel. I really do. Beautiful poem. "But some love too" might sound better as "And some love too" or "And a little love too". The composition does not suck!
69black fairyI know how you feel. I really do. Beautiful poem. "But some love too" might sound better as "And some love too" or "And a little love too". The composition does not suck!