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7/11/2001 c1 33Whispering Night
I like the way you set this up, with each stanza beginning with the same line.
7/9/2001 c1 69black fairy
I know how you feel. I really do. Beautiful poem. "But some love too" might sound better as "And some love too" or "And a little love too". The composition does not suck!

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