for The Coven of the Blade1/27/2004 c2 Goner
It definitely a good beginning. The prologue really hooked me into the storyline. I don't really see anything wrong with either chapter, so I can't give much constructive criticism. I truly hope there is more on the way, keep writing :)
It definitely a good beginning. The prologue really hooked me into the storyline. I don't really see anything wrong with either chapter, so I can't give much constructive criticism. I truly hope there is more on the way, keep writing :)
12/26/2001 c2 Kima Harres
Except for the NC-17 part the story is going good keep going
Except for the NC-17 part the story is going good keep going
7/14/2001 c2 Aegean
Always finish what you start.
Always finish what you start.