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9/24/2004 c1 5Moon860
spoky...gee thats one weird story-where'd ya come up wit something like that, 'tis strange,
thee hast pleases m'lady Moon860, now, BOW!
^_^ gr8 story, nxt chappie plz
read and review my story/poems/both
rite bak soon, hopefully in the form of a delightful review full of happiness!
yours truly,
a slightly odd fictionpress author,
namety, Moon860!
4/12/2003 c1 lozza-pilgrim
Hey!

It was great but... huh? Is there going to be another chapter? I hope so!

~ Lauren
7/13/2001 c1 2Kiwi Smoothie
That was... odd.. But pretty good none the less..
7/11/2001 c1 30Parteepants
Sure it leaves a lot of questions unanswered like "Who is the broad?" "Why is she there?" and so forth, but you write well. The mood and setting were good and if you answer some of the obvious questions you could have a decent story here.
7/10/2001 c1 4Iguana
aaagh! dietagsdie..

Oh well, you get the general jist of what they're meant to be right?

*makes a mental note never to use tags again..*

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