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9/24/2011 c1 22my poor toaster
Thats really deep.
3/10/2006 c1 31Zakiue
I like the first four lines. The one thing I would change is in the seventh line. Using "my" there doesn't make a lot of sense. I would change that to "a" or something. Anyway, that's very minor.
5/18/2004 c1 20My Psychosis
Hm, very deep, very good. You misspelled "hear" in the third line, but it's great! I love this kind of poem. (don't really know what to classify it under...)
2/5/2002 c1 avanents
very cool, I like, i thoguht at first little shildren woul dbe opening the window, heh heh,

reminds me somewhat of leeks from the animorph books i read like 5 years ago.
1/3/2002 c1 21hidden manna
this was well written it's like you can see what your saying. good poem.
7/24/2001 c1 48Ragdoll
That was really interesting and mysterious. I liked it. Sometimes we get secrets even when we don't want them.
7/23/2001 c1 dillpops
It's kind of like hearing voices or going mad. I like it's describing points, they make it spindley kind of (iz dat even a word?)i like it!

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