for And It All Fell Apart7/12/2001 c1 anime-Luver's Lover
That was a wonderful poem. It seems to capture how great things can be for anyone and how much you can miss it when it all goes away.
That was a wonderful poem. It seems to capture how great things can be for anyone and how much you can miss it when it all goes away.
7/11/2001 c1 
21girls-not-right
This was a beautiful poem and had an almost musical feel to it. Every time you repeated "And it all fell apart" it had the same impact as it had in the beginning. Very kewl.
21girls-not-rightThis was a beautiful poem and had an almost musical feel to it. Every time you repeated "And it all fell apart" it had the same impact as it had in the beginning. Very kewl.