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3/6/2006 c1 Amelia Landon Mendal
I can't login because I'm at school but that's my pen name anyways. Great story, very cute! Sorry only half of it was true (and the part that was better wasn't yours :-( lol) I like the way this was written. A little confusing with all the girls and names, but good nonetheless. -Ami
5/15/2005 c1 21Sarah Elizabeth Julia
That was a really cute story. I liked it a lot.
8/14/2004 c1 AnimeArrow
Aww.. how sweet... Yes, you should continue writing short stories, because not only are you good at it, but long ones are tedious to read. .
Anywho, i think you should make your shotrt stories a little longer. This one didn't have much twists in the plot, so add those in too. And I think you should go more in depth about the characters' emotions. Yes... okay... I am quite done now. Paysh out! :P
12/6/2003 c1 4AAGoddess-of-the-Ocean
That was really good! Good job! :) Keep on writing.
:)Skylla(:
ps) Please can you read and review my stories? #0_o# *puppy dog eyes*
10/25/2002 c1 Guest
Very cute! :) I encourage you to write more! :)

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