for shaggy red carpet8/30/2001 c1 Tatl Tayl The Two Faeries
Good, very good, but I barely got through all the adjectives. (sighs) You're on the edge of a liddle ole thing called 'Purple prose', babe, and that's bad. Descriptions are nice, but you went a lil too far. Not a flame, but I myself really didn't get like *any* of it besides you're angry at yourself and you're cutting and the blood spills onto the carpet. Tone it down some. ANy more descriptions and you'd be Christoipher Rice. (shakes head) -Damy
Good, very good, but I barely got through all the adjectives. (sighs) You're on the edge of a liddle ole thing called 'Purple prose', babe, and that's bad. Descriptions are nice, but you went a lil too far. Not a flame, but I myself really didn't get like *any* of it besides you're angry at yourself and you're cutting and the blood spills onto the carpet. Tone it down some. ANy more descriptions and you'd be Christoipher Rice. (shakes head) -Damy
7/24/2001 c1 shadowbox
Damn, why can't i think of this? Amazing. Goddess, we should just team up and write some God awful fluff story or a deep, depressing one. Actually, i'm lying, i suck too damn much. Anyways...i gots the new Nsync cd! I love it, i love it *does a dance* God i'm a teenie! I can just see Chris going hell yea with me right now. Moving on...email me, k Twit? Much love and take care-Angel.
Damn, why can't i think of this? Amazing. Goddess, we should just team up and write some God awful fluff story or a deep, depressing one. Actually, i'm lying, i suck too damn much. Anyways...i gots the new Nsync cd! I love it, i love it *does a dance* God i'm a teenie! I can just see Chris going hell yea with me right now. Moving on...email me, k Twit? Much love and take care-Angel.
7/20/2001 c1 
12flutter bye
Remember the day we told on Aimee? Now look at all three of us. Where we used to all be close, you, aimme and myself have sorta drifted apart. Im really hoping that you have not fallen out of any trees this summer. We might not talk very much, but Im here if you need an open heart.
12flutter byeRemember the day we told on Aimee? Now look at all three of us. Where we used to all be close, you, aimme and myself have sorta drifted apart. Im really hoping that you have not fallen out of any trees this summer. We might not talk very much, but Im here if you need an open heart.
7/14/2001 c1 2L.E. Lamkin
Gross. Self-mutilation and suicide themes. Pretty icky. This was well-written. You've got some potential. Nice job.
2L.E. LamkinGross. Self-mutilation and suicide themes. Pretty icky. This was well-written. You've got some potential. Nice job.