for Story of a girl1/5/2005 c4 
36Somnia
Your poetry's good, the repetitions effective. Try using some more imagery. Also, I don't personally think you need the explinations, as you make the story quite clear in the poetry itself.
36SomniaYour poetry's good, the repetitions effective. Try using some more imagery. Also, I don't personally think you need the explinations, as you make the story quite clear in the poetry itself.
6/5/2004 c4 Person
Wow..your poems are really lame...very lame.
They're not even poetry...just short little statements with one repeating line. And you're stupid for "freaking out" whenever you "BFF" decides she likes your boyfriends and dumping them. Obviously your BFF isn't that great of a friend.
But that's not the point.
The point is
You could do a lot better on these poems.
Because they suck.
ANd since this is an anonymous review, you'll probably delete it anyway, so I'll say it again -
You're poems suck.
Wow..your poems are really lame...very lame.
They're not even poetry...just short little statements with one repeating line. And you're stupid for "freaking out" whenever you "BFF" decides she likes your boyfriends and dumping them. Obviously your BFF isn't that great of a friend.
But that's not the point.
The point is
You could do a lot better on these poems.
Because they suck.
ANd since this is an anonymous review, you'll probably delete it anyway, so I'll say it again -
You're poems suck.
9/19/2001 c4 Kyrie not signed in
What a mess! How do you and your friends and your boyfriends manage to keep tangling up so badly? Well, hope it goes better in the future!
What a mess! How do you and your friends and your boyfriends manage to keep tangling up so badly? Well, hope it goes better in the future!
9/14/2001 c4 20SleepyAngel
dude...this is deeply sad. maybe u didnt mean it to be. but those poor guys who u broke their hearts!
20SleepyAngeldude...this is deeply sad. maybe u didnt mean it to be. but those poor guys who u broke their hearts!
8/29/2001 c4 21girls-not-right
At least you and Jimmy are still friends. I'm really sorry all that stuff happened to you. But sooner or later you'll meet your soul mate. Trust me, they're out there.
21girls-not-rightAt least you and Jimmy are still friends. I'm really sorry all that stuff happened to you. But sooner or later you'll meet your soul mate. Trust me, they're out there.