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3/4/2005 c1 1Shuyan
Great job. It could use a little more and detail here and there but other than that its really good. Great job and are you makin' a second chapter? If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness: The battle
3/22/2002 c1 17Cianna Greenwood
Wow. Is that the end or is there more? It's not clear on whether or not he kills himself. Even so, this is a very good story and I like it alot.
9/17/2000 c1 Jojo2
This story is so cool, Annie-chan!

Though it could use a bit of spell checking...

Anyway, I loved it! Read my stuff once I put some of it up!
7/8/2000 c1 Allana
I really liked it. It does need a little more detail, and I would like to know what happened before. Which battles did he fight in? What is his background? His name? What he looks like? Other than that, it was very well done. I hope there's a sequel.
7/6/2000 c1 John Santana
Cool, If there's anything in particular I like, it's writing from the first person. I believe that you can express yourself alot more vividly from that perspective than in any other. This is a very nice work- I think you should work at it and see if you can expand this into something even greater- The universe is your toy! One.

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