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12/17/2004 c1 55Lellida
Wow. That is one amazing story. The parallel ship lines were really poetic, and the last bit of them summed everything up. Interesting how you compared the two people to flotsam and jetsam. Really powerful metaphor, and strong story. I really can't think of much else to say, because it was really good.
7/26/2001 c1 Gee
A brilliantly written story showing how destructive some relationships can be. I loved the part about the ship. It really brought your point across.

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