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11/8/2008 c1 5quicktart
Good job!

The only thing I saw wrong with it was the “falln limp” thing. Was the word suppost to be “fallen” or “fallin’ ”?
1/2/2004 c1 17spond
I don't say this very often but...I LOVE IT! my only problem is the last line it doesn't seem to fit.
8/29/2001 c1 22Meegwun
i love the way these two poems compliment each-other. Very nice!
8/29/2001 c1 7Cloud9Dolphin
Great poem! I LOVE IT LOVE IT! hehe! KEEP WRITIN! ~RINI~!

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