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9/16/2005 c2 3DaughterofVlad
great!
9/1/2001 c1 6Strider Hunter
riveting story, but the format needs improvement. perhaps paragraphs would help?
8/31/2001 c2 2Nezumi1
Awsome story so far! Keep writing!
8/31/2001 c1 Micky
i like the writing style you employ. Your storytelling and buildup throughout the first chapter was great, but on the second i got the impression you got tired and decided to write a short one. In any case, the way you built up the mystery and horror in the first chapter was impressive, though your 'finish' fell less of my expectations after a good first part. if you do decide to write a longer short story or revise this one's finish for the better, do email me (please) and i would be glad to do a second review. (Michael)

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