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2/5/2014 c1 bekbekah92
That was amazing
12/4/2003 c1 1elmolover1234
I love this story. It's so true to life! I can really relate.
9/30/2003 c1 191mmoonsshiner
being a Rain Childe iam quite partial to the stuff but i dont understand the reason behind the hurt.on a better note i think this poem is very well written i love the repetition it really holds the body together nicely and the rhyme scheme is quite good. well thats all for now

~Nat The Unchanging Darness~
1/15/2003 c1 1Rogue6
Boring.
12/11/2001 c1 6izziebitt
lovely... really, lovely.
12/10/2001 c1 Kritik
Not bad, I liked the overall effect. My main complaint is the "no more's" get a bit repetitive and some of the lines are really unnecessary.
12/8/2001 c1 empty account
How sad. I love rainy days though, it's the sunshine that bugs me.
12/5/2001 c1 18Kitai Matsuru
I have read a lot of poems, and this is one of the best by far. Keep up the good work.
12/5/2001 c1 4NinjaRage
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!I CAN`T WRITE LIKE THAT!THAT RULED!EXCELLENT!(keep writing)
12/2/2001 c1 2Paintdrop
very beginning and end parts are nice, when you say them out loud they just run right off your tongue.
10/6/2001 c1 6Musogato
ohhh... v_v Rainy days never last forever. Keep on hoping, the clouds *WILL* go away.
9/17/2001 c1 8Erwin J
uh...no comment
9/17/2001 c1 Elwing Alcyone
That really is sad. I don't know why anyone would run away.
9/16/2001 c1 22Celtica
Great poem :) I can really feel what you're writing about! Keep up the wonderful work :) Keep Writing! -Celtica
9/16/2001 c1 Glory Night
I've done that before, but I always end up back home, because anywhere else just isn't for me at my age. I think that was a really good poem too! I love reading them! Keep up the GREAT work!

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