for Eyes of the Dragon6/17/2005 c2 
11Areneth
Another story read! I like this one! It's cool, I like the concepts and ideas. That deamon lady is pretty smart.
11ArenethAnother story read! I like this one! It's cool, I like the concepts and ideas. That deamon lady is pretty smart.
5/11/2003 c2 54Werecat99
Much better. The formatting, I mean.
And now I need to know more about those demons.
So far it's interesting. I'll be waiting for an update.
Thanks for the reviews, BTW.
54Werecat99Much better. The formatting, I mean.
And now I need to know more about those demons.
So far it's interesting. I'll be waiting for an update.
Thanks for the reviews, BTW.
5/11/2003 c1 Werecat99
Loved the concept of villages and their *true* gods. Feels very real.
And the way she asks of the children to tell her of a story... that was brilliant. I wish I had thought of that as well.
One minor complain, though. The formating of the chapter makes it hard to read, and it's a piy, since this is very interesting. Try and edit it, perhaps?
Loved the concept of villages and their *true* gods. Feels very real.
And the way she asks of the children to tell her of a story... that was brilliant. I wish I had thought of that as well.
One minor complain, though. The formating of the chapter makes it hard to read, and it's a piy, since this is very interesting. Try and edit it, perhaps?
4/4/2002 c1 4Straw-wolf
Ooh, this is really good! That whole name thing is a good idea. So, is Dara going to get into any trouble? Write more so I can find out.
4Straw-wolfOoh, this is really good! That whole name thing is a good idea. So, is Dara going to get into any trouble? Write more so I can find out.
3/28/2002 c1 14Tea Bush
Great beginning. Very intriguing.
~Mike the Tea Bushman
P.S. It should be a Fallout 2 fanfic! ;-)
14Tea BushGreat beginning. Very intriguing.
~Mike the Tea Bushman
P.S. It should be a Fallout 2 fanfic! ;-)
3/8/2002 c1 14Ninsetta Tristel Sundar
hey that's really cool. You have to write more because i'm really interested. Irepeat you must write more. I really like the name idea as well as the main characters thoughts. I also want to know what her real name is. In short I have a lot of questions and if you could answer them with more of a story I would really love it.
14Ninsetta Tristel Sundarhey that's really cool. You have to write more because i'm really interested. Irepeat you must write more. I really like the name idea as well as the main characters thoughts. I also want to know what her real name is. In short I have a lot of questions and if you could answer them with more of a story I would really love it.
12/22/2001 c1 Hikage Ninja
It's good. Thanks for reviewing mine, I appreciate it. Keep up the good work with yours, I'll add you to my favorite so I can check back now and again to see if you've written anymore.
It's good. Thanks for reviewing mine, I appreciate it. Keep up the good work with yours, I'll add you to my favorite so I can check back now and again to see if you've written anymore.
12/13/2001 c1 11Lady Aryun
I like, I like, I like! You've got me hooked on this one, you have. I'm not a grammer person. I should be considering I've taken 5 years of latin, but I'm not ^_~ Anyway, this is great, intruging and just all in all wonderful! Ja! ~ Cat
11Lady AryunI like, I like, I like! You've got me hooked on this one, you have. I'm not a grammer person. I should be considering I've taken 5 years of latin, but I'm not ^_~ Anyway, this is great, intruging and just all in all wonderful! Ja! ~ Cat
12/5/2001 c1 Raonaid Dvhid I have a problem of not signing in too
Good little story you have here, thought I should return the favor and read your story since you seemed to enjoy two of mine.
Good little story you have here, thought I should return the favor and read your story since you seemed to enjoy two of mine.