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11/25/2006 c1 16Long Island Iced Tea
If only you could space out the paragraphs, it'd be easier to read.
8/23/2003 c1 Kestral
great story, liked the fact he wouldn't answer her questions v.cool. rite more loadz more
5/18/2003 c1 5pessimistic romanticist
loved it i like how you wrote it in detail awsome i agree that you should add more really good begging but u should of had more of a intro u kinda just dove into it
2/27/2003 c1 33Darkmaster
I like it please write more.
9/14/2001 c1 Kathryn Starr
Oooh. I like. Needs structural help, but the plot is horribly creative and wonderful. =) ~Kat
9/2/2001 c1 8Ice Demon
That was a creepy person.The Story was cool though.
9/1/2001 c1 6Strider Hunter
can't give this story a fair review because I couldn't stand the format. Put everything in paragraph form, and I'll review it!
9/1/2001 c1 Anonymous
I absolutely LOVE this story, so far! Please keep writing!
9/1/2001 c1 Tasha Hill
Love it! Write more pleasessssss!
9/1/2001 c1 2Nezumi1
Good so far! write more!
9/1/2001 c1 4Anne Sinclair
Good work! I think you should contiue. Perhaps add a chapter about the girl's first night as a vampire? I liked it. Just don't forget when to capitalize.

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