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11/24/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
hey good job with your poem. i like the diction and the use of imagery in your poem it definatly adds to the overall meaning. if u want r+r my stuff ( i suggest "the pace of it all" and "suffer" lemme know what u think)oh yeh and if u like that review some others too i would appreciate it. good job with your poems peace

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11/23/2000 c1 1Tsukino Chou
who'd ya write this one about, sis? O.o;?
7/6/2000 c1 Rage Neko
wow... you know, i can almost feel how you felt when i read that.. Andrea-chan, my Hime, please.. you HAVE to tell someone.. someone who can help you, who's closer to you, at least physically. if not your parents, then maybe Jenna..? please.. as long as you're in pain and I'm feeling soo helpless to do anything about it, I'm going to tell you this. I strongly feel you should tell someone.. who is up to you.. just someone who's in a better position to help you than me. I don't want you to suffer.
7/4/2000 c1 Neiko1
Beautiful...

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