for donne moi ma liberté1/25/2006 c1 
41sarah1491
I like how you emphasized with the spaces, although it makes it hard to read the words around it. Good poem~
41sarah1491I like how you emphasized with the spaces, although it makes it hard to read the words around it. Good poem~
12/20/2002 c1 71Toireasa
Whoa... craziness. I like it... a lot...
~Toireasa
(ahem, I can't say much more, considering that I'm not sure how I'm to reply. Sorry for the god awful review.)
71ToireasaWhoa... craziness. I like it... a lot...
~Toireasa
(ahem, I can't say much more, considering that I'm not sure how I'm to reply. Sorry for the god awful review.)
2/19/2002 c1 SoAp
AmAziNg~! BeAuTiFuL~!
AmAziNg~! BeAuTiFuL~!
11/4/2001 c1 lily potter
Incredible poetry. Very abstract,imageric and screaming of betrayal most tragical and piteous.
Incredible poetry. Very abstract,imageric and screaming of betrayal most tragical and piteous.
10/30/2001 c1 Maxine
I think your font is a little odd, but i guess that's because of the ff.net reformatting :) But what the heck, this was great stuff anyway and i am so totally in respect for you and your writings. It's a pity u don't write many originals, 'cos I don't have an idea what Final Fantasy VVI is, so please write more, you're simply talented. *quickly prints poem and shows her friends*
I think your font is a little odd, but i guess that's because of the ff.net reformatting :) But what the heck, this was great stuff anyway and i am so totally in respect for you and your writings. It's a pity u don't write many originals, 'cos I don't have an idea what Final Fantasy VVI is, so please write more, you're simply talented. *quickly prints poem and shows her friends*
10/12/2001 c1 Aes Sedai Ani K
you're amazing with words...the right words in the right way. I hope to see more, and this wasn't at all a disappointment.^_^ potent words...man, scarr, you rule!
you're amazing with words...the right words in the right way. I hope to see more, and this wasn't at all a disappointment.^_^ potent words...man, scarr, you rule!
10/6/2001 c1 Garion not signed in
That was a classic. The sadness of it all, the devastation, you managed to portray it so wonderfully in this poem. I usually skip free verse but yours was unique. It was a masterpiece!
That was a classic. The sadness of it all, the devastation, you managed to portray it so wonderfully in this poem. I usually skip free verse but yours was unique. It was a masterpiece!
10/2/2001 c1 lisa
oh my god.. this is so beautiful. i'm sure you're received many other reviews that say this but...oh well. anyway i just want to let you know that this was probably one of, if not the best poem i have ever read.
oh my god.. this is so beautiful. i'm sure you're received many other reviews that say this but...oh well. anyway i just want to let you know that this was probably one of, if not the best poem i have ever read.
9/25/2001 c1 blue quisty
beautiful. you have such great talent, and i think your vocabulary is amazing. i so happy that you are coming back to ff.net and i'll be looking forward to your futue works- ffvii related and more.
beautiful. you have such great talent, and i think your vocabulary is amazing. i so happy that you are coming back to ff.net and i'll be looking forward to your futue works- ffvii related and more.
9/16/2001 c1 2miss toad
I'm wailing, ;.;. Ack, it was so, so, so beautiful, my breath is stolen each and every time I even glance at one of your works.. Why can't I do that? Weave together some intricate balance, so beautiful, I'm forever it awe.. you have something beyond a stretching expanse of vocabulary, beyond skill.. You're a Shakespeare of this generation, a master, a Goddess... Wow..
2miss toadI'm wailing, ;.;. Ack, it was so, so, so beautiful, my breath is stolen each and every time I even glance at one of your works.. Why can't I do that? Weave together some intricate balance, so beautiful, I'm forever it awe.. you have something beyond a stretching expanse of vocabulary, beyond skill.. You're a Shakespeare of this generation, a master, a Goddess... Wow..
9/7/2001 c1 DawningFlames
Wow. That' absolutely marvelous. when i get te chance o log in i;'m deffinately adding this one to my favorites. I lve your style and your imagery is amazing. This si a great poem!
Wow. That' absolutely marvelous. when i get te chance o log in i;'m deffinately adding this one to my favorites. I lve your style and your imagery is amazing. This si a great poem!
9/7/2001 c1 Jenzy
you know, i would have reviewed this two days ago. however, ff.net was experiencing some technical difficulties, causing me to delay my reading. enough of my rambling, though. i must say, i love your original works just as much as i adore your ffvii ones. all your poems emit an austere aura, including this. by the way, i have an immense amount of topics to keep you updated on. (also, i asked clara about the multi-collaboration project. hope you don't mind.) keep up the excellent work, i miss you!
you know, i would have reviewed this two days ago. however, ff.net was experiencing some technical difficulties, causing me to delay my reading. enough of my rambling, though. i must say, i love your original works just as much as i adore your ffvii ones. all your poems emit an austere aura, including this. by the way, i have an immense amount of topics to keep you updated on. (also, i asked clara about the multi-collaboration project. hope you don't mind.) keep up the excellent work, i miss you!