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11/20/2002 c1 Hikari
Oh boy...how in the world do you get these rhyming words outta your head? And really, HOW THE HECK DO YOU PUT THEM TOGETHER SO WELL? YOU JUST GOTTA TELL ME! ^_^; (sry I'm hyper again)
9/14/2002 c1 3Tiffany Kremer
First off, I can't review poetry very well, but I'll take a shot at it since i do many times anyway. ^_^

A very touching peice. You can feel the emotion in this, the feeling of lost...about wanting that one person to stay there with you, and then the security... Hopefully I have that correct...

The rhyming is well done. It flows smoothly without blemishes. A very good job.
9/7/2001 c1 1Paiden Mergin
Sigh, I can relate to this story to a tee. Keep writing. Hope to read more. :)

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