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5/1/2002 c1 pastel garlic
i like the way this one flows...
12/11/2001 c1 6izziebitt
I love the imagery. So lovely... keep writing.
12/10/2001 c1 Kritik
ouch. i really don't like these rhymes (especially the last one, sorry) the illusions are fine but once again, try to find some different rhymes
12/8/2001 c1 empty account
a bit dark isn't it? someparts I don't agree with, but still very, very nice.
12/5/2001 c1 18Kitai Matsuru
Me again. I really like your poetry. You are really good at this.
12/5/2001 c1 4NinjaRage
beautiful.I really liked it.It showed so much that i`ve thought about before.that was so beautiful(Keep wrting)
10/6/2001 c1 6Musogato
The only test you can really fail, is giving up.
9/17/2001 c1 Elwing Alcyone
Wow, that's a really sad one. I like 'raging rivers swept me away'. Good imagery.
9/16/2001 c1 Glory
I really don't think that you think of your life that way. I like how you write about dark things almost. Because I can identify with them. The only thing is, I believe in god very much so. Well, keep up the GREAT writing! I'm looking forward to reading more.

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