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7/17/2004 c1 21Diva Chiba
that was very beautiful and symbolic. the description and everything was done rather perfectly... well done!
~Diva Chiba
10/17/2003 c1 28the tuesday after
You make me want to write "beautiful" inside my eyelids.

L.
8/30/2003 c1 594JoyfullyStruggling
that was beautiful
3/10/2002 c1 Stardreamer
Interesting symbolism...a flower (a thing of life and light) linked to darkness. Kinda like craving something that isn't natural, or 'normal'? Thanks for giving me something to think about! Great work! :)
9/13/2001 c1 2Californian Poppy
I wonder if you meant it, but this poem seems to tie in softly with the tragidies at the moment, espesially the line,

I cry for the dying

Shadows, caught in tender... Hidden inside those

dark-gray petals,
9/13/2001 c1 Butterfly Goddess2
Lovely! I really like this poeme.

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