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8/26/2003 c1 27Brighty
I really liked your story, the style was very descriptive and colorful. The story was actually very freaky. So was Emily left at the house the same way Rebecca was? And does it mean Rebecca is gonna do the same to some other girl?

Definitely good job for a first story. By the way, you might wanna read my first story "Her Plane Arrives at Seven", it's also kinda scary.

Peace,

XMARIAX
1/12/2002 c1 12Chloe
Wow, that was a really good story. A bit like R.L Stine, really good, I love your use of similies,"The branches of the old tree outside the window were spread out, like black ink veins against the

pale white of the moon." brilliant!

P.S Thanks alot for reviewing my story, it means alot to me, I've added another chapter to mine now, hope u like it as much as I like your stories. :-)
9/14/2001 c1 Maixne Catsani
haunting. You're a good writer, keep it up:)

Max

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