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5/3/2009 c1 Indicates
Too bad I won't see more of this...

It's an 'okay' story, despite the time.
7/10/2006 c1 priceless gallery
Wow.. I really marvel what you've done with this.. Inetesting, and well written too. lol Travis reminds me so much of my oldest brother... :| scary..
1/1/2005 c1 2raingurlsofia
I never got why the title was haunted until the end. Still doesn't sound right. It was really good, and I loved the suspense... but you never explained what the 'Freedom' was, and that would've helped me understand it a lot. It was really good!
12/15/2004 c1 5Senkai Ninja
It's really good even though it's scary and horror :*(
10/22/2004 c1 56whatsapenname
um...fifth graders taking economics and shooting people? good story but make it a little more believable next time.
~whatsa~
8/21/2004 c1 KillaZ
Nice!
3/21/2003 c1 SaraMudo
Wow. Way too depressing. It's my fault for reading it. Very well written though.
6/12/2002 c1 someone
Nicely written story. If only there were no such things as school shootings...

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