for A Demon's Revenge4/11/2004 c1 
83Nails For Your Crucifix
My God that was fantastic. It was so powerful with the imagery and the last line was, by far, the best in this entire piece. It has a very clear mood and carries your message well. Nice job.
83Nails For Your CrucifixMy God that was fantastic. It was so powerful with the imagery and the last line was, by far, the best in this entire piece. It has a very clear mood and carries your message well. Nice job.
9/11/2003 c1 5KaiRei
Nice poem I really got into it.^_^ Demons shall rule ALL! Muahahahahahah!
hehe...well, bye bye! ~Snki~
5KaiReiNice poem I really got into it.^_^ Demons shall rule ALL! Muahahahahahah!
hehe...well, bye bye! ~Snki~
9/17/2001 c1 B
Wow. Very, very good . . . very vivid imagery, wonderful use of yer adjectives. One suggestion, though, make it a smoother for the reader, so that if you want to make it choppy in a part, it'll have some contrast.
Wow. Very, very good . . . very vivid imagery, wonderful use of yer adjectives. One suggestion, though, make it a smoother for the reader, so that if you want to make it choppy in a part, it'll have some contrast.
9/15/2001 c1 Julie
OMG Piper! I love this poem, it reminds me of things I have written before, only better. You are just too good. *hugs and kisses*
julie
OMG Piper! I love this poem, it reminds me of things I have written before, only better. You are just too good. *hugs and kisses*
julie
9/14/2001 c1 xhardygrl316x
hey! i like it! very dark :)
hey! i like it! very dark :)